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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:04 am

fine... but im keeping the absolute zero Exclamation hopefully..

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:13 am

yes
you can keep that

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:14 am

well it looks good to me now but id like another mods opinion on it

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:20 am

k and nice anbu mask Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:16 am

Cancellation: cancels opponent's jutsu, but requires no movement of user and the same amount of chakra used for the opponents move

Take that out, and the ice armor...

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:45 am

y ice armor though?
and can i make cancellation just eye contact

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:01 pm

No, cancelations is already used by Hito. And about the ice armor, it's because Nexro said he had one similar...

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:13 pm

yeah but mine is different because it is weaker but u can regenerate it

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:37 pm

Still, the concept is the same. Sorry

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:41 pm

fine its done

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:54 am

well he corrected everything you said, and he looks fine to me, any1 else agree?

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:25 am

((Zero-Point Energy: shoots an invisible chakra string straight at opponent, and if it hits then the opponent is unable to move (by anything even outside forces) as long as user keeps a constant stream of chakra going into it))

Isnt that jutsu abit 'OTT' it cant be broken by anything? It sounds alot like Fuuma clans Chakra no Ito which is a forbbiden jutsu but even those chakra threads can be broken. In my opinion your version seems to be a little too powerful. I mean its invisible, un breakable even by outside force which renders the opponent unable to move atall...It's raised some question in my mind :X

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:45 am

it seems fine to me

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:46 am

obviously it can be broken.... it can't be invisible and unbroken..

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:48 am

hm well i think okibis got it down, and everything looks fine to me except it might take some time after to inactive purge till you could join akatsuki

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:58 am

Zetsumei wrote:it seems fine to me

Then if it was performed on you, once hit by it what would you do?

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:17 am

replacement jutsu, it could be a clone, its simple to escape

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:19 am

Zetsumei wrote:replacement jutsu, it could be a clone, its simple to escape

Not everyone can/will escape what would you do if it hit you?

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:19 am

lol how would you escape if you didn't know it was coming? but nvm, it can't be invisible and unbroken. It can be either one, but not both.

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:21 am

i think unbroken is the better choice, then i think its fine

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:27 am

Zetsumei wrote:i think unbroken is the better choice, then i think its fine


Id say invisable to normal eyes but obviously there are acceptions like Byakugan etc. Also id make them breakable by chakra or exeptional weponry not standard, dosnt that seem abit more acceptable for a missin nin?

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:30 am

well, since he uses ice, lets say only fire jutsus can break it, and we all know that at student-genin, most kohona nin learn fireball or grand fireball

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:34 am

I agree a little more with Lee. He uses ice, but the thread is made of chakra. Chakra doesn't have an element, it rather has an affinity. And if you go by element, it would be broke by either earth or fire, since those are the strong elements versus water and wind, which form the ice

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:26 pm

it isn't unbreakable, its invisible; its the target that cant be moved at all not the chakra string, it would be used sort of like Ino's mind transfer jutsu

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Post by Guest on Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:25 pm

Invisible to normal eyes only, there are exceptions that can see it. Although yeah it does sound much more realistic, i like it. It has a good advantage yet the string can be broken and you yourself can be attacked. Although it still dosnt leave alot of hope for the person hit by it, if hit there has to be a loop hole around it but to be fair to you thats not for you to state....So ive got a question for you:-

Once the chakra string has come in contact with your opponent he cant move atall but can you?

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