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Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:29 pm

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yOu GoT pWnD bY l33!


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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:26 am

- About your bloodline. By 'overloading' the chakra system with a larger quantity of chakra, no matter if it's ready for it or no, it would certainly cause some kind of damage to it, am i wrong?

- About the stage two. How fast exactly does the user move? What side effects does it cause?

-'(can cause death if used too long... they must know their limits)'; How long would that be?

- About your looks. I believe that image or an image of the same character is already in use, so you'll have to change it.

-'Kiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu '; That jutsus seems to me to be a unique trait of Orochimaru ( And Zetsu, maybe), mainly due to the fact that it was not mentioned as a jutsu. Since no official, or precise information was given about that, you'll have to remove it.

-For the remainder of anime jutsus, please use the descriptions on www.leafninja.com, as that's the site we often base ourselves upon.

-'Jutsu Sho'; I believe someone else already has a jutsu like that.

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Post by Guest on Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:59 am

- Your first comment, I believe you mean causing damage to the user? I would say no for stages one and two. Yes for stages three, I guess it would make her bed ridden for a couple hours or days?

-I will make specifics

-I will make specifics

-The looks, are that i used on my past profile, thats why you might of seen it. If you do find someone else, and if they are active then i will change it of course, but it makes no sense to make me change it when the other person hasnt been on in like two months...Just My opinoun, No offense.

-'Kiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu I will change.

-The person I got this from is very intelligient, and i believe these are close, or exactly the same as the ones on leaf village. I am looking at some of them and some of them are the same. If i still have to change it, ok.

-The last bullet, is a jutsu i once again used on my old profile.

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Post by Guest on Wed Jun 25, 2008 12:18 pm

- Yes, that's fine.

- The looks. It's not that pic, but it's the same Character. Utahime, the Kazekage, uses it as her looks.

- It's not about the descriptions being incorrect or something, it's about not existing ' tons ' of different descriptions for the same jutsu, lol.

-About that last jutsu, i got it straight. I had the impression Soul had it, and yes, it's him who has. lol

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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:25 pm

Ok, I have done everything you have asked...

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Post by Guest on Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:56 pm

Apparently, i missed some stuff on my first look..

-'magnifies their average speed to body flicker level'; That is somewhat subjective, as the speed of the Body Flicker will depend on the skill and level of the user.

-'Jibaku Mandara'; Supposedly, that jutsu is unique to the Fuuma clan members, and only some of them.

-' Shoten no Jutsu'; again, the same principal of the 'Kiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu'. I don't think official information has been released, therefor the description and usage of that jutsu is based on 'assumptions'.

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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:11 pm

-Yes, but if they reach that level of strength, then for sure its that level or even higher.
-Ok, changed it.


Anything else/\?

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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:10 pm

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Post by Guest on Sat Jun 28, 2008 9:43 am

Like i told you, you need to be specific on the speed. The body flicker of a genin and a Jounin are completely different. Even between the same rank, the speed changes. Saying that the speed is " half of a body flicker" or something is too vague.

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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Sun Jun 29, 2008 5:51 pm

Since I cant edit the topic:

Their average speed is kage level when in stage 3: Stage one is the speed of Chuunin cut in half. Stage two if Jounin.


That better?

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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:02 pm

BUMP!

This is seriously taking too long for these little mistakes, Can i please get some more attention here? its been like a week already.

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Re: Kiki Tenshi [Approved]HH

Post by Guest on Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:24 pm

I like it, looking forward to meeting you, hopefully it will be peaceful, but only time will tell. Sorry for the wait, happy rp'ing to you.

Thanks
Hodaka Hyuuga

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