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Post by Guest on Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:09 pm

To be quick, yes Mitsu is a mod, yes elements and 'normal' summons are all copyrighted and something that you guys totally missed: I was the first to have elemental summoning, two weeks after the rpg started. Not that I care though, I'll leave the copyright with Ukiku.

Dont worry about the jutsu though, I'll do some of them now and some of them later.

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:23 pm

Rouka Hitsugaya wrote:((these mostly arent))
tiger(hu)

tora jutsu tora hirate - tiger style tigers palm: the user positions their hands as if they are about to slap someone. they then curl and spread their fingers and thumb. also bending their hand backwards so its vertical while the arm is horizontal. the user then thrusts their hand into the enemys throat/chest/stomach doing considerable damage.
rank:c

tora jutsu tora ken - tiger style tigers fist: the user forms a normal fist but leaves a gap between their thumb and fingers, allowing the user to do more damage from focused points.
rank:c

tora jutsu tora ashige - tiger style tigers kick: the user kicks the enemy but keeps their leg bent until impact. once contact is made the user straightens their leg, forcing the enemy backwards.
rank:c

tora jutsu tora tsume - tiger style tigers claw: the user extends their index and middle finger but slightly bends them, using them in a powerful jab to the opponents pressure points at the side of their body.
rank:b

Before I start allowing jutsu I must first tell you that I count these as 'style based' jutsu, meaning you limit their use to when you are using the stile only. Besides that, jutsu have chakra consumption meaning that when you use a style this will cost chakra, connected to the duration of the style. Not only these techniques but ALL of it, seeing that these are part of the larger whole.
Fighting in a style will be dangerous to you btw, seeing youre not allowed many techniques in one post using styles is tricky.

Tora jutsu tora hirate - tiger style tigers palm:
Enhanced physical strike, accepted.

Tora jutsu tora ken - tiger style tigers fist:
Enhanced physical strike, accepted.

Tora jutsu tora ashige - tiger style tigers kick:
Distanciating physical strike (very practical =D), accepted.

Tora jutsu tora tsume - tiger style tigers claw:
Hyuuga teritorry, the effect of a single strike would be so small that it wouldnt matter and to repeat it would require eye-techniques or knowlege of the subtle fist style. Sorry, just cant give you that.

Tigerstyle completed. I'll finish them all before I send them, you can post comments and whatnot inbetween but dont push it =P, that tigers claw isnt going to be accepted easilly.

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:53 pm

Rouka Hitsugaya wrote:((not finished still snake, crane and dragon to go))

panther(mei zhou bao)

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou ashige - panther style panther kick: the user drops to the ground so they are on all fours, with their legs apart. balancing on their hands the user then spins into the enemy, kicking their legs with the first leg and kicking them elsewhere with the second.
rank:c

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou ken - panther style panther fist: the user makes a fist but with the flats of their fingers at a 45 degree angle, protruding the second row of knuckles, place the thumb into the sides of this fist. the user then uses the panther fist for quick, strategic jabs to pressure points around the body.
rank:b

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou suro - panther style panther throw: the user flips into the air, above the enemy. they then grab the enemys shoulders, arms or neck while upsidown, when they land they throw the enemy over their shoulders, slamming them into the ground, they then spin in a circle gathering momentum and throw the opponent as far as possible.
rank:b

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou klab - panther style panther slam: the user grabs the opponents arm, twists it by the wrist and holds it by the shoulder, using the arm as a lever. by doing this the user can easily flip the opponent regardless of their weight and slam them into the ground
rank:c

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou teiryuui - panther style panther disable technique
the user grabs the opponent by their collar bone and twists it breaking the bone and disabling their nerves and ligaments running to their arm, stopping them from using their arm. (temporary)
rank:b

Kurohyou jutsu kurohyou ashige - panther style panther kick:
Specificly definde physical strike, approved.

Kurohyou jutsu kurohyou ken - panther style panther fist:
Again, dont use pressurepoints, those styles are included in the sublte fist of the hyuuga clan already.

Kurohyou jutsu kurohyou suro - panther style panther throw:
Make it a C-ranked and its approved.

Kurohyou jutsu kurohyou klab - panther style panther slam:
Accepted.

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou teiryuui - panther style panther disable technique:
...and the nerves to your arm run trough your collarbone... Some are covered by the bone but breaking it does not immobilise your arm. It kan make it harder, but thats the worst of it. Not approved because it just doesnt work that way =P

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Mon Aug 25, 2008 3:37 pm

all the moves are taijutsu and dont use chakra it just tells you how to do the different moves, its basicly like konoha reppu and konoha senpuu using a description of how to do them but theyreboth part of a style in which theyre similar. i used jutsu as a substitute for the japanese word for style, basicly its been used in the wrong context.

the panther fist is actually the only real move in the panther style on here lmao. i learnt that one on holiday cos my moms friend goes out with a tai chi expert XD there are a few hundred pressure points over the body and panther fist aims at just fifty.(one per punch)

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Post by Guest on Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:46 am

That being so styles require more strenght and acrobatic moves are enhanced with chakra in naruto all the time. Sasuke needed it in his lion-combo.
Besides, if youre smart, you add that cuz the rules say that chakra using taijutsu is stronger then regular.

As for the reality, I cant accept pressurepoint attacks, theyre Hyuuga teritorry man. I know that it works with them in real life, even though many say that its rubbish, but even if it works the effects will not be very large.
Its a very good effort I must say, the idea of appllying kung fu like styles here was very bright. Youre just out of luck that Kishimoto created the subtle fist style and we dont want double techniquess.

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Post by Guest on Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:52 am

thats gutting lol k ill change it. would i be able to use vital points such as the temple and trachea(addams apple)?

what if i kept a description of how to do the moves but added the enhanced physical strike bit so people would have some idea how to counter that particular move? or if i changed enhanced physicalk strike to enhanced palm thrust or something?

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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:31 am

Well, vital spot-searching strikes are allowed as long as you dont push it too far. Frequency-strikes to damage the meninges would be out of the question for that is med-ninja teritorry, but most is alright.

The second part is a good idea. What would be cool as well is design each style for a specific situation. Air-attacks, slow moving opponents, defence, offence etc. It makes designing the techniques easier as well.

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:55 pm

cool ill go for vital points then. so im gathering its alright to change the moves to suit the approvment so i can get them all approved?


also the panther disable one i reaserched what the collar bone does and what goes around it:
Covers the cervicoaxillary canal (passageway between the neck and arm), through which several important structures pass.
It serves as a rigid support from which the scapula and free limb are suspended. This arrangement keeps the upper limb (arm) away from the thorax so that the arm has maximum range of movement.

i figure if the collar bone is broken yes the immobilisation would only be temporary(which i aimed for) but it would still happen.; if done wrong or with extreme force the attack would rupture the cervicoaxillary canal. causing extensive damage.!!! ha i actually did some decent research. jesus my life sucks if i do that kinda thing lol.


thats what all the different styles are for. tigers for people who match you in all aspects. panthers for people who are faster/stronger than you but are of a more mediocre intelligence. cranes for people who are bigger than you but slower and snakes for when your low on energy or are facing an opponent who out-do you in almost all aspects. dragon and phoenix are a mixture of all four.

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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:42 pm

I actually know a friend who fell when mountainbiking and broke his left collar bone. He said it hurt like "*****" but that he could still move his arm.
No better research then first or secondhand experience Wink Doing some research isnt bad though. Thats the best way to create a sound combat system and why noone ever comes up with an equally complicated lightning-jutsusystem to mine. Cool

Try to show the styles purpose in the techniques. When I'm revieuwing them anyway it doesnt really bother me if you add one or two more, to make it complete. And those you can add now you will have when you need them later Wink

I like the style idea man. Damn, if it'd be my call, every AS would have to learn one of them.

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:49 pm

fair enough ive ruined my whole fuckin borin life for nuthing. oj i didnt have much else to do anyway.

fair enough experience is best but you should know i have 3rd hand experience. my moms old friend sophia broke hers and couldnt move her arm more than 30 cm for three years. she broke it so bad a lump protruded from her arm at 2 inches high where half of it was on the skin. but that was a pretty bad break tbf so whatever.

(btw that happened twelve years before i was born so it could be utter bullshit told by 7 people but whatever)

sorted ive made curriculum level moves XD XD XD

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Post by Guest on Fri Aug 29, 2008 12:29 am

when youve finished checking the rest of the jutsus ill edit those aswell and put it all on 1 big post

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:49 pm

Rouka Hitsugaya wrote:((please ignore the convo above))

crane(he)

kijuuki jutsu hishou no kijuuki - crane style flight of the crane: the user jumps into the air, landing on the opponent and using them as a stepping board to go higher into the air, allowing the user to dodge many attacks and leaves the opponent open to arial attacks.
rank:c

kijuuki jutsu kouro no kijuuki - crane style running crane: the user uses a complex pattern of flips, rolls and jumps to evade the opponents attacks.
rank:c

kijuuki jutsu nijuu tekubi - crane style double wrist: when the opponent throws a punch the user blocks the attack by pushing it down, the user then brings their arm upwards, bending their hand downwards and strikes the opponents chin or neck with their wrist.
rank:c

kijuuki jutsu chi hane - crane style thousand feathers: the user attacks the opponents pressure points at high speeds using the two main fingers on both hands.
rank:b

kijuuki jutsu hishou no kijuuki - crane style flight of the crane:
Sure, as long as you dont use the grammatical 'absolutes' as true absolutes.. To put it simply, an opponent wont be "open to aerial attacks" completely and stuff like that.

kijuuki jutsu kouro no kijuuki - crane style running crane:
Pre practiced dodge, would work against all but specialised opponents and sharingan like abilities (they would actually be more effective when you use pre-practiced moves, so watch out with that)
Approved.

kijuuki jutsu nijuu tekubi - crane style double wrist:
Too simple... Add more... stuff(Razz) to get it approved.

kijuuki jutsu chi hane - crane style thousand feathers:
Sorry man, again the pressurepoint problem.

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Post by Guest on Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:57 pm

Rouka Hitsugaya wrote:snake(she)

hebi jutsu hebi kiba - snake style snake fang: the user uses their main two fingers and thumb to attack various chakra/pressure points around the body, stopping the flow of chakra and wounding the opponent. the only chakra points the snake style can attack without byakugan are the obvious ones such as the temple, spine, below the carpace(bottom of ribs) and the heart.
rank:b

hebi jutsu hebi hitonomi - snake style biting snake - the user grabs the opponents larynx or trachea (upper or lower addams apple) depending on the amount of damage intended. they then twist it, cutting of the opponents air supply. larynx wounds(temporary), trachea kills(permanent).
rank:a

hebi jutsu hebi jiten - snake style snake spin: the user spins down to the ground and aims a kick at the bottom of the opponents spine. the user then spins backwards an upwards, elbowing the opponent in the crotch, making them double over. the user then elbows the back of the opponents neck knocking them unconcious or if on the tip of the vertabrae it kills them.
rank:b

hebi jutsu sanjuu bikou - snake style triple tail: the user attacks the enemy with both hands and one foot at the same time while balancing on the free leg. the user attacks the crotch, heart and neck in pressure points, wounding or if done with enough force can kill.
rank:b

hebi jutsu hebi kiba - snake style snake fang:
You saw that Neji needed to block all of naruto's chakra points to really do much. The blocking you'd bring upon your opponents wouldnt last very long since small walls are easilly breached.
You can keep it if you want, it could be practical to use this as a preparation for another strike.

hebi jutsu hebi hitonomi - snake style biting snake:
A ranked? Ok.. approved.

hebi jutsu hebi jiten - snake style snake spin:
Combo goes, combo does. Simple, combos go trough combo rules Razz Approved, but to explain how you'll use this in battle would be troublesome and you already know it. To connect a combo you need to have pushed your opponent into a corner.

hebi jutsu sanjuu bikou - snake style triple tail:
Approved, but dont exagerate the damage mate Wink

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:13 pm

shaolin - five animals style:

The TIGER is for all the direct, simple strong aspects of Kung Fu. For people who are strong and like being direct. Most techniques from Bear, Tiger, Black Tiger, etc., were placed under this general header. It also included Lifting and Throwing Grappling, all 'quick' finish techniques that were simple and easy and Tearing techniques. Tigers main and major target is the Throat for both Striking & Grappling.

Panther (also Leopard) was the Animal Style was for person who like using their mind to win. Who believed that Strategy is more important than skill. It contained Debilitating and Confusing techniques where many different sub-specializations were possible. This became the 'Ninja' of the Shaolin 5 Animal Style and included all Poison Hand techniques. Elbow/Knee and Shoulder/Pelvis were the main Grappling Target areas.

Crane is the style for Elegance, evasion, wearing down and for person lacking strength and relying on Elegance, Agility and Evasion. It was the style you learned when you did not want to fight. It is the style you used if you were small, agile and relatively quick in your body movements. Wrist and Finger Chin Na were the more famous aspects of Crane grappling.

Snake represents all styles that required precision and economy. The Snake was for patient persons who like to avoid conflict at all cost and would only engage if there was no other way. But then it would be lethal, sudden and over. The Snake contained most of the 10,000 Bee style, Grappling techniques that were permanent. The Strong Snake would Capture the attackers breath and keep it with it's grappling or destroy the attackers Energy with it's Striking.

Dragon was the aspect of the style that dealt with Chi, meditation and right thought! One is called a Dragon when one masters the 4 and ascends to the 5th Style by combining the 4. Bruce Lee was often called the Little Dragon. Although he was a master of conflict and conflict strategy, many believe that he did not achieve full Dragon because of his focus on the physical and conflict.

pheonix
The Shaolin Phoenix is the other side of the Dragon. In the odd occasion when the Ideal Warrior can not find the Ideal Solution but a solution is imperative, you seek to destroy all in the hope that something new and better arises from the ashes. This is of course as a last and desperate solution

tiger(hu)

tora jutsu tora hirate - tiger style tigers palm: enhanced physical strike
the user positions their hands as if they are about to slap someone. they then curl and spread their fingers and thumb. also bending their hand backwards so its vertical while the arm is horizontal. the user then thrusts their hand into the enemys throat/chest/stomach doing considerable damage.
rank:c

tora jutsu tora ken - tiger style tigers fist: enhanced physical strike
the user forms a normal fist but leaves a gap between their thumb and fingers, allowing the user to do more damage from focused points.
rank:c

tora jutsu tora ashige - tiger style tigers kick: distancing physical strike
the user kicks the enemy but keeps their leg bent until impact. once contact is made the user straightens their leg, forcing the enemy backwards.
rank:c

tora jutsu tora tsume - tiger style tigers claw: enhanced vital strike
the user extends their index and middle finger but slightly bends them, using them in a powerful jab to the opponents vital points at the side of their body such as the jugular vein and temple.
rank:b



panther(mei zhou bao)

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou ashige - panther style panther kick: Specificly defined physical strike
the user drops to the ground so they are on all fours, with their legs apart. balancing on their hands the user then spins into the enemy, kicking their legs with the first leg and kicking them elsewhere with the second.
rank:c

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou ken - panther style panther fist: enhanced vital strike
the user makes a fist but with the flats of their fingers at a 45 degree angle, protruding the second row of knuckles, place the thumb into the sides of this fist. the user then uses the panther fist for quick, strategic jabs to pressure points around the body.
rank:b

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou suro - panther style panther throw: enhanced physical throw
the user flips into the air, above the enemy. they then grab the enemys shoulders, arms or neck while upsidown, when they land they throw the enemy over their shoulders, slamming them into the ground, they then spin in a circle gathering momentum and throw the opponent as far as possible.
rank:c

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou klab - panther style panther slam: enhanced physical grapple
the user grabs the opponents arm, twists it by the wrist and holds it by the shoulder, using the arm as a lever. by doing this the user can easily flip the opponent regardless of their weight and slam them into the ground
rank:c

kurohyou jutsu kurohyou teiryuui - panther style panther disable technique
the user grabs the opponent by their collar bone and twists it breaking the bone and disabling their nerves and ligaments running to their arm, stopping them from using their arm. (temporary)
rank:b



crane(he)

kijuuki jutsu hishou no kijuuki - crane style flight of the crane: evasive arial dodge. the user jumps into the air, landing on the opponent and using them as a stepping board to go higher into the air, allowing the user to dodge many attacks and leaves the opponent momentarily open to arial attacks.
rank:c

kijuuki jutsu kouro no kijuuki - crane style running crane: pre-trained evasive tactics. the user uses a complex pattern of flips, rolls and jumps to evade the opponents attacks.
rank:c

kijuuki jutsu nijuu tekubi - crane style double wrist: enhanced counter attack. when the opponent throws a punch the user blocks the attack by pushing it down, the user then brings their arm upwards, bending their hand downwards and strikes the opponents chin or neck with their wrist.
rank:c

kijuuki jutsu chi hane - crane style thousand feathers: the user attacks the opponents joints, tendons, nerves and vital points at high speeds using the two main fingers on both hands.
rank:b








snake(she)

hebi jutsu hebi kiba - snake style snake fang: enhanced vital strike. the user uses their main two fingers and thumb to attack various chakra/vital points around the body, stopping the flow of chakra and wounding the opponent. the only chakra points the snake style can attack without byakugan are the obvious ones such as the temple, spine, below the carpace(bottom of ribs) and the heart.
rank:b

hebi jutsu hebi hitonomi - snake style biting snake: enhanced vital strike. the user grabs the opponents larynx or trachea (upper or lower addams apple) depending on the amount of damage intended. they then twist it, cutting of the opponents air supply. larynx wounds(temporary), trachea kills(permanent).
rank:a
((youd understand if you had detailed schematics of the trachea))

hebi jutsu hebi jiten - snake style snake spin: enhanced physical strike combo. the user spins down to the ground and aims a kick at the bottom of the opponents spine. the user then spins backwards an upwards, elbowing the opponent in the crotch, making them double over. the user then elbows the back of the opponents neck knocking them unconcious or if on the tip of the vertabrae it kills them.
rank:b

hebi jutsu sanjuu bikou - snake style triple tail: specifically defined physical strike the user attacks the enemy with both hands and one foot at the same time while balancing on the free leg. the user attacks the crotch, heart and neck in vital points, wounding the opponent.
rank:b

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:07 am

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Post by Guest on Sun Sep 07, 2008 8:08 am

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Re: new jutsus(five animals(ignore mine and star-doms convo)

Post by Guest on Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:22 am

Dont bump too much, I havent got all the time of the world and even if I had I still wouldnt be able to revieuw every second.

Ill do the last style and then look at what you have fixed. Mind, im doing this on print since I wont have internet this afternoon so dont continue bumping Wink

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Post by Guest on Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:31 pm

k i just bumped a couple of times cos mine was falling behind quite a bit but whatever XD

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Post by Guest on Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:08 am

Love them.
Creative and very interesting.
Approved!

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