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new summoning jutsu [ready for approval]

Post by Guest on Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:23 pm

Name:Summon Hagarane
Rank: C
Element: none
Description:
Summons a human size Black jackal named Hagarane.
The first beast which forged a contact with the enzei clan.

Hagarane can use three different jutsu:

Name:Mud shot
Rank:D
Element: earth
Description:
Spews a ball of mud from the mouth which has chakra blended into it.
which is aimed at the target.

Name:Black claws
Rank: C
Element: none
Description:
Slashing with his claws while releasing some chakra from his paws Hagarane gains the ability to cut clean trough a rock for a brief moment.
This ability is used in close combat to penetrate light armor

Name:Kanabashi no jutsuu - temporarily paralisys
Rank:D
Element: none
Description:
Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.
the jutsu works in a radius of 10 meters max (which is about 30 feet)
source:http://leafninja.com/ninjutsu-08.php#007

Also he can change himself into a piece of black armor made out of metal which is located around the users lower right arm which ends in a metal black claw.
It`s looks are really plain but it enhances the wearers speed which is based on the speed of hagarane.
the claw is mostly for show but it can be used for steep cuts and some other uses for the creative mind but has no other ability then just a simple weapon.
when in this form none of the jutsu he has in his regulair form can be used

Hagarane can talk and has a simple personality he is stubborn loyal and addicted to chocolate which he demands as a tribute for his "service" his main ability is speed
and he likes to talk alot.
furthermore besides from beeing a jackal which is coloured black he has no special characteristics besides from an earring in his left ear with the enzei symbol on it


Last edited by Nadeshiko on Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:58 am; edited 6 times in total

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Re: new summoning jutsu [ready for approval]

Post by Guest on Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:30 pm

Bump

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Post by Guest on Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:20 pm

bump

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Post by Guest on Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:16 am

Give a better physical description and maybe a picture.

Add to special charateristics about his powers etc.

The layout is kinda weird try and alter it.

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Re: new summoning jutsu [ready for approval]

Post by Guest on Sun Sep 07, 2008 8:19 am

Blitz boy wrote:Give a better physical description and maybe a picture.

Add to special charateristics about his powers etc.

The layout is kinda weird try and alter it.

I did what you asked me to do

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Re: new summoning jutsu [ready for approval]

Post by Guest on Sun Sep 07, 2008 10:00 am

Add to the discription of your jutsu. The idea is to show how the thing works. If you paralyse someone, what do you do? Do you select a spot where, if he passes trough, the opponent gets paralysed or do you aim it? It cant be automaticly hit. Things like that.

Cant approve them like this.

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Re: new summoning jutsu [ready for approval]

Post by Guest on Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:06 pm

Ok, now its alright. Accepted and ill move them to your profile.

Have a nice day man, and dont bump too much!
(Ja, ik heb al 2 bumps verwijderd maat Wink)

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Re: new summoning jutsu [ready for approval]

Post by Guest on Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:15 pm

okay thx man
(lolz srry)

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